D4 A3
I strongly disagree with Donald Trump because he is putting out a big wall between the loved ones of the U.S.A and the Mexico people. What if some of the Mexican people's family are on the other side of the U.S.A and they were trying to get their. And what if they want to start a new fresh life in America. We all know America is the biggest country ever! So why would he build a ginormous wall between the friendly 2 countries? This is Maria saying I STRONGLY DISAGREE WITH HIS DECISIONS!
Hey Maria,
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team, and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
I like how you've focused on how it will affect loved ones and families between the two countries. It is really important to focus on how these big decisions affect the people around them. You have clearly stated your opinion and ended your post with a strong concluding statement which is really powerful and draws the reader's eye to your posts.
It's also really cool to see you have used rhetorical questions really effectively to bring the reader into the situation and to question what they think. Great work, Maria.
As you are a year 8, I want to offer you the challenge to add more exciting elements to your blog posts. What kind of things do you think would draw people to look at your posts? Maybe some visual elements? Up to you.
I'm looking forward to seeing more fantastic work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Daniel